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Years later, stores would come to add Paula on a list of people banned from purchasing teddy bears due to negligence and abuse. After being denied any more teddy bears, Paula went on to create a bear making factory filled with her own bears. ...The factory later burned down. There were no survivors.
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I gotta be honest, I don't really like the direction you're going with this arc of the story...
The Deep Darkness was a dark, ominous swamp, and you're kinda treating it like an episode of the Simpsons... I just don't think all these gags and little jokes are appropriate for the environment they're in.
Yeah, I know the enemies and characters were pretty goofy, and if you've already planned all of this out for this arc, then that's fine. I just really wish you went in a more serious, tense direction with this part of the story, like when Paula got kidnapped, the AMAZING Kraken battle, or the Pyramid arc. Just my opinion...
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~Pokeninjagirl Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Teddy! :(
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